So this was a caption that I'd written awhile back, but I wasn't that
happy with it, so I'd forgone publishing it for awhile. Today, I went
back and cut some text, changed some things, and over all, I am much
more pleased with how it turned out this go around. I've posted the
original as well, so if you'd like to see how it originally was, take a
look, and let me know what you think of the changes!
Transcript: Ardent squeals continued to stream out from Chloe’s lips as
the particularly well hung stud behind her continued to pound her eager
pussy. Being in Chloe’s body was literally an out of body experience for
Ben and though there was a particular discomfort to being so roughly
dominated by another male, the overpowering sensation of heavenly bliss
from Chloe’s female body certainly more than made up for it.
Ben had originally possessed Chloe’s body at the request of his good
friend and Chloe’s boyfriend, Dan, who was looking for a discreet way to
better learn how to please Chloe in bed. Being the good friend thatBen
was,he had agreed to Dan’s plan. A few magic potions later, Ben had
found himself in Chloe’s body.
The man pleasuring her at the moment however was not Dan, but Lance, the
football team’s star fullback. The precarious situation had all began
when, following Dan’s takeover of her body, he had found Chloe at
Lance’s house and in the middle of a steamy make out session. Chloe was
cheating on Dan! He’d wanted to pull away, but had thought better of it
and stopped himself to avoid giving himself away. As dumb as Lance was,
even he could’ve figured out that something was amiss if Chloe’s
demeanor suddenly changed. The longer he allowed Lance to go on however,
the more he found himself enjoying it, even starting to think of
himself as her. If Chloe was a fine instrument, then Lance was a master
musician. Lance knew just where and how to touch her petite body and
what to say to fill her stomach with a thousand fluttering butterflies.
It wasn’t long before the new Chloe had caved into her desires and
allowed Lance to take her entirely.
The pleasure that Chloe was experiencing now seemed almost ethereal.
She’d never felt such bliss. For awhile now, the entire area from her
hips to the tops of her thighs had been getting really warm. Her body
had started to get tight as a wonderful pressure began to build up
within her, signaling the point of no return. It had gotten tighter and
tighter and warmer and warmer until suddenly, giant satisfying
contractions began all over her body. Her toes clenched, her nipples
grew hard, and her pussy had started to throb and convulse. She let out a
feverish cry, begging Lance not to stop, but to fuck her harder.
Her thighs were still shaking and her body soaking wet as Lance flipped
her over and spurted his sticky load all over her hot body. That had
been amazing. Basking in the warm afterglow of her mind blowing orgasm,
Chloe was no longer contemplating on the least painful way to break the
news to Dan, but rather how long it would take Lance before he was ready
for round two...
ORIGINAL:
Note: Original title was "Heartbreaking Discoveries"
Not terribly happy with the layout, but it's the best I could come up
with for now. I may go back and try to split this into a two panel
caption later...
Transcript: Ardent squeals continued to stream out from Chloe’s body
as the particularly well hung stud behind her continued to pound her eager
pussy. Being in Chloe’s body was literally an out of body experience for Ben
and though there was a particular discomfort to being so roughly dominated by
another male, the overpowering sensation of heavenly bliss from Chloe’s female
body certainly more than made up for it.
Ben had originally possessed Chloe’s body at the request
of his good friend and Chloe’s boyfriend, Dan. Noticing that Chloe had never
had an orgasm with him in the two years that they’d been together, Dan had
intended it as a way for him to discreetly experiment on her body and thus learn
how to please her in bed. Ben had reassured his friend that many girls couldn’t
climax from vaginal stimulation alone and that perhaps Chloe was just one of
them. To help put his friend’s mind at ease though, he still agreed to take
over Chloe’s body so that Dan could experiment with it in secret.
The man pleasuring her at the moment however was not Dan,
but Lance, the football team’s star fullback. The precarious situation had all
began when, following Dan’s takeover of her body, he had found Chloe to be at
Lance’s house and in the middle of a steamy make out session. He’d immediately
wanted to pull away, repulsed at the idea of kissing another guy, but he’d had
to stop himself to avoid giving himself away. As few brain cells as Lance had
left over from all the hits he’d suffered, even he could’ve figured out that
something was amiss if Chloe’s demeanor had suddenly changed. However, the
longer that Ben had held out, the more he had come to enjoy the feelings of
Lance’s muscular body against his new feminine one. Strangely enough, he’d even
found himself starting to think of himself as Chloe and wanting more. Things
had progressed rather quickly after that, one thing leading to another and soon
she had found herself in the position she was in now.
The pleasure that Chloe was experiencing almost seemed to
be ethereal. She’d never felt like this before in her life. For awhile now, the
entire area from her hips to the tops of her thighs had been getting really
warm. Her body had started to get tight as a wonderful pressure began to build
up within her, signaling the point of no return. It had gotten tighter and
tighter and warmer and warmer until suddenly, giant satisfying contractions
covered her entire body. Her toes had clenched, her nipples grown hard, and the
inside walls of her pussy had started throbbing and convulsing, causing her to
let out a scream, begging Lance not to stop, but to fuck her harder. Her thighs
were still shaking and her body soaking wet when Lance had flipped her over and
spurted his load all over her tight little stomach. That had been amazing. As
she basked in the warm afterglow of her mind blowing orgasm, Chloe contemplated
on the least painful way to break the news to Dan…